
Three teenage friends, Pete, Tim and Annabeth, went camping in a forest far from the city. They were super excited to go camping together without any adult supervision. Their parents had allowed them ...
Genre : General
Category : Picnic
Total Pages : 87
Awesome story plot! Keep up ur work👍.
Congratulations Saransh. Great efforts by you. Indeed an interesting read. Keep writing.
Heartiest congratulations dear Saransh! I loved every bit of your book. Your vocab, the colour scheme, the background, pictures, theme everything is pretty well planned... Keep it up!
Congratulations Saransh. You have shown your ability to narrate a story in a wonderful way. A great start. Wish you all success in future.
Amazing Saransh. I read from beginning till end in one go. You have a very bright future ahead ....
Great book! A really interesting read. Very intriguing plot. Don't stop writing!
Good book.
Unimaginable.. wonderful story Saransh Still amazed at how a child your age has written so beautifully. Keep writing
Like the preview and bought it for my Grandson. This kind of story will definitely appeal to the modern kids of today's age
Really good story had a good plot
Lovely story line.very well written
Excellent write up by young author. Nice storyline.
Good Effort by the young author. Print quality is very good but delivery timeline is too long. I wish it was available on Amazon.
Awesome read. What makes it more interesting is the twists and tunrs in the plot.
Good and adventurous storyline by kid
Nice and interesting read. Doesn’t look like something written by a 10year old.
Great read, my children loved it! Have also ordered paper copy for my collection of children's book.
Good adventurous story. Language and story flow is smooth. Loved it!
As soon as I started reading it, I could start feeling the thrill. Keep up Saransh!!!!!
Loved it :-) Good bedtime story and easy to read!
I wish you great success with your writing and with life! I look forward to reading your upcoming books,As this was totally fantastic ,Very nicely presented.
Saransh's adventurous book is a thrilling read that will captivate readers of all ages. Despite his young age, Saransh demonstrates a talent for crafting a gripping story full of unexpected twists and turns.
The 3 lead characters narrate their plot brilliantly. This paves the way for a thriller which is embedded neatly into the fabric of the story.
It's an eclectic out-of-the box adventure story. It is evident from the narrative that the writer has spent a considerable amount of time visualising every minute of the story.
Beautifully illustrated with excellent description.
Wow kudos to the young budding author. Splendid story. What a start!!!
Creative imagination! 😍 Loved it!
Great efforts by young author.
Vary adventures and thrilling
It's a thrilling tale of outdoor camping of 3 kids. The story slows down and becomes drab at one point but picks itself up quickly. Usage of graphics is apt and delights the reader. I would give it a 4 out of 5 rating. Good but needs improvement.
Splendid our newbie shall get more encouragement
Nice story, Please refer my book " Mortelle Game "
It's an impressive story on all accounts. Set up in an outdoor camping setting, the story puts spotlight on adventure. The story will gobsmack you with it's suspense. Happy reading :-)
This is a real adventurous story..